Being the last day of NaNoWriMo, I figured I’d give a recap of the month for me.
I began with an idea that had been cooking in my head for the better part of a year, inspired by (specifically) the pants of SOLDIER grunts and (more generally) the style of Midgar in Final Fantasy VII, as well as pirate lore and history.
I got off to a good start by beginning with an unplanned section of the story, which occurs about midway through the plot. Other than an extensive and mostly unnecessary (not to mention probably inaccurate) surgery sequence, this first chapter went well.
The second chapter swung back to the start of the plot and introduced the main character, Daniel, and put the narration in his hands. This seemed to work well up until the point where he began to speak with other characters and his narrative voice and speaking voice were completely different. I thought I could deal with this as the story was being told by the Daniel of the future, so I could allow him to grow into the narrative voice more.
I then began introducing some unplanned characters. They were Gregor and Rudy. They seemed to work well, although Rudy was a little one-dimensional, but I figured he needed time to get more depth, which would evolve through jealousy in the first half of the book. The other main character I introduced was the captain, John, who, rather than being the clever, manipulating and ambitious captain I wanted him to be, instead became an indifferent ass with no regard for life at all who was a bit of a gambler. To be completely honest, other than that gambling thing he was basically an author avatar who just happened to also be a pirate.
=D
Most of the problems with the plot were my exceedingly strict planning and overly high expectations.
I then tried to begin another story with superheroes, which I thought was interesting, but got distracted by video games so uh, that didn’t happen.
However, both of these stories are something I will come back to. Blackjack (the first story) will probably need a complete reset, and Patchwork (superhero one) will need the plans I’ve done stripped down to allow more freedom.
Next year, I will attempt NaNoWriMo again. I’m also going to go into it with no plans, no ideas, no expectations, no anything except a keyboard and a vocabulary (and arguably creativity and talent…very arguably :/).
also probably no fucking hope.
Whatever.
See you next year, NaNoWriMo.
-Vyperchild